The main character in my book is named Celeste,she is very strong willed which isn't good when you live in a polygamists family.Celeste also listens to her families concerns and needs.when john asked her to run away with him she really wanted to go, but she didn't want to hurt or betray her family.Because of her fears of hurting her family she didn't leave unity until her baby was born, because she wanted her baby to have a better life than she had herself. I think this action shows selflessness because even though it hurt her and her family when she left,she had to think of her baby which now comes first in her world now.
I chose this song because the begining says "it's always been about me,myself and i"i thats how i think celeste feels untill she has her baby and makes the right decison for for her baby not just her anymore.
The reason for choosing your video was well represented with your reasoning. That's a positive and should be continued.
ReplyDeleteI think that you should watch your spacing and capitalization for your next blog post. Other than that the structure of the paragraph was good.
Be careful not to make run on sentences. You can use a comma or put a period and then continue oon with that thought in a different sentence. I reaaly enjoyed the song you have chosen. It relates really well to the description of the main character of your story.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you described the main character in this book, and I really thought the song went well for it too! I kind of had a hard time reading the font on your blog though. What did you think of her decision to leave her family? Did you support her in her actions?
ReplyDeleteThis book has a very different topic about it, did you enjoy reading it? I enjoy the layout of your blog but again i was unable to read it and some puncuation errors.
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